You’ve got to change your style,
rhyming, bumpy, jumpy phrases,
leaves me aghast! Let your words flow free;
Now is freedom’s play-time.
Away with cliché-verse, away with misspelled words
that drives my mind sky-rocketing into disbelief.
Alcatraz-verse guarded with symbols confining to
traditional stiffness.
“huh, huh, huh!’
I beg you, come into The Now, where freedom is prevailing, and shackles are falling like autumn leaves.
Leaving the imagination wide open to plunge, plunder,
And explore its depths. Wade in tides where contemporary rivers flow. Believe me when I say, Then will drown,
Now will come into focus.”
“Okay”